Thank you so much! I'm so glad you found this fic, and thank you for taking the time to give me such wonderful feedback.
I also enjoy the flashbacks, and how you're telling a story within a story through them.
I've used flashbacks before but never to such an extent. I wanted to tell the story of what happened to Draco during the war, but I despise exposition. It made much more sense to me to show Draco's memories at a time when Harry's presence is bringing them all flooding back.
I love Draco's internal monologue. Seriously, I've repeatedly burst out laughing as I read the story, he cracks me up.
Thanks! I've tried to make Draco relatively eccentric and neurotic as that's how I love him best. I think he was probably a little bit eccentric anyway, but his years of only having a child for company probably made him worse! :oD
Thanks again for the feedback. the next part should be out tomorrow.
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Date: 2007-10-23 06:32 pm (UTC)I also enjoy the flashbacks, and how you're telling a story within a story through them.
I've used flashbacks before but never to such an extent. I wanted to tell the story of what happened to Draco during the war, but I despise exposition. It made much more sense to me to show Draco's memories at a time when Harry's presence is bringing them all flooding back.
I love Draco's internal monologue. Seriously, I've repeatedly burst out laughing as I read the story, he cracks me up.
Thanks! I've tried to make Draco relatively eccentric and neurotic as that's how I love him best. I think he was probably a little bit eccentric anyway, but his years of only having a child for company probably made him worse! :oD
Thanks again for the feedback. the next part should be out tomorrow.