I can't help but think that the 'tiny black fly' is an Anigmus.
Mm, that would be interesting wouldn't it?
I've really took a liking to this story.
Not only is it well written but it draws a person in.
Seeing how much both men have changed brings a warm feeling to my chest. They've both grown up so much.
And their children are just to die for.
Good job on this story, I do look forward to more.